Do you have a Chapter or scene(s) in your story about cops, firefighters, or EMS workers needing to be checked for accuracy? I will read up to 2000 words and offer feedback.
Please send me your chapter or scene(s) in a Word DOC so that I can add comments and suggestions inside the track changes system.
Items I will be looking for include
- Dialog use and jargon
- Operational procedures
- Descriptions of skills and techniques
- Accuracy in the use of public safety technology
- Constitutional violations by characters in the story
- Terminology with weapons
- Anything else I might spot as being cliche
Please note I am not an editor and will not be looking for grammar or spelling errors. This is a subject matter read over only.