Finished an early draft of your next great novel?
Sent me your word DOC to review. I will offer feedback via track changes and be available for follow up. Once you look over the comments we will jump on a video call so you can get any clarification needed before your working on the next draft of that story.
Items I will be looking for include
- Dialog use and jargon
- Operational procedures
- Descriptions of skills and techniques
- Accuracy in the use of public safety technology
- Constitutional violations by characters in the story
- Terminology with weapons
- Anything else I might spot as being cliche
Please note I am not an editor and will not be looking for grammar or spelling errors. This is a subject matter read over only.